Fynley Portrait Poem
My heir is like the golden silky sand blowing in the breezy wind.
my arms like cannons shooting ball all thro the day writing and typing words.
My intalijins like atlantis appearing and disappearing in the my legs like v8 supercars moving like the wind and paring me thro the day. random.
My nose like a black hole never been entered or explored.
My hands like forklifts lifting and moving writing and drawing things
My eyes like security cmaras watching everything and not missing a movement.my frekils like gold nugets all over my face.
My teeth like hammers and Knives crush in and cutting food
Be yourself and don't let others get you down
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Hi Fynley :)
ReplyDeleteMy name is Ellee and I will be blogging with you this summer for the Summer Learning journey!
This is a great poem you have written I feel like I have learnt a little bit more about you. I also think this is great descriptive writing, I like the similes you have used, they are very thoughtful.
I especially like the eyes like security cameras, teeth like hammers and freckles like gold nuggets! .... I wish I had gold nugget freckles that would be great!
I can't wait to see if you will post more on your blog this summer for the Summer Learning Journey activities.
If you want to check out the Summer Learning Journey website you can follow this link: https://sites.google.com/site/summerlearningjourney/
Here is also a link to the weekly activities:
https://sites.google.com/site/summerlearningjourney/weekly-activities
Remember each activity is worth points so make sure once you’ve finished an activity post it up on your blog so we can add it to your total!
Hopefully I'll see you blogging over the summer soon!
Ellee :)